TITLE BOX
In the title box, DAD walks into the living room to see RAYNE emptying a bag of pretzels into a toy pirate ship.
DAD
Are you putting pretzels in your pirate ship?
RAYNE
Yes.
Next Panel, RAYNE looks back obviously.
DAD
Why?
RAYNE
Because sometimes you don't let me have enough pretzels.
NEXT ROW
INSIDE – KITCHEN. RAYNE walks into the kitchen, where MOM and DAD are having breakfast. RAYNE looks wired, he's been up all night.
RAYNE
I did it.
RAYNE sits down at the table.
RAYNE
I stayed up all night.
RAYNE looks challengingly at DAD.
RAYNE
I hope you've learned a lesson here today.
RAYNE passes out on the table.
Cut to last night, in RAYNE's room, where RAYNE refuse to go to bed. DAD shrugs and leaves.
CAPTION BOX
Last night
RAYNE
I don't want to go to bed!
DAD
Fine. So Don't.